Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

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Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Staticbog » Sat Nov 21, 2015 7:24 pm

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He isn't the best art (in a hurry when i drew it) but at least it's something (yes i'm a avatar fan don't judge)

Storm
Health 150/200/250/300/350/400/450/500/550/600
Damage 2-7/5-13/10-15/13-20/18-25/23-28/25-30/28-35/33-38/36-40 (range and melee magic damage)
Defense none/none/none/none 25%/none 25%/none 25%/none 25%/none 50%/none 50%
movement speed average/average/average/average/average/fast/fast/fast/fast/fast
attack speed average/average/average/average/average/average/average/average/average/average
Regen speed 20 HPS
revive speed 20 secs
Species air born

Abilities

Total points - 47 (a lot i know)

Flight - ground enemies can no longer attack/new attack dive bomb (5 more damage)/ Dive bomb (10 more damage) 2/3/4 points
wind down-cut - jumps (or flies) very high and goes straight down dealing 200/250/300 damage 1/2/3 points
blessing O' wind - doubles near by allies for 5/7/10 seconds 1/3/5 points
Wind choke - kills an enemy by removing its air 80/50/20 second cooldown 2/3/3 points
Activated ability - wind storm - pushes all enemies back to the start (deals 100 damage to all enemies) 100/80/60 second cooldown - 4/5/6 points

Story - his name is storm after being found after a attack by an evil unknown casting storms

Phrases

Wind & flight
Sticks & stones
Give me my wings!
Upon death - Wind will blow back

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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by WizardLord160 » Sat Nov 21, 2015 8:33 pm

How come I see a blank sheet of paper :?:
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Staticbog » Sun Nov 22, 2015 3:48 pm

WizardLord160 wrote:How come I see a blank sheet of paper :?:

it was hand drawn... and what do you mean blank?
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by RaZoR LeAf » Sun Nov 22, 2015 4:10 pm

WizardLord160 wrote:How come I see a blank sheet of paper :?:


Because the picture is over 1500 pixels wide, and the actual image is small and in the middle of that large expanse of white. You can only see a blank page, because that's all the forum will display; the right hand side of the huge picture, instead of adding scroll to the page so you can see it all. The solution of course, is for Staticbog to crop the image, so that only the relevant part of it is visible and upload that instead. Not this wallpaper sized white space.
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Staticbog » Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:00 pm

RaZoR LeAf wrote:
WizardLord160 wrote:How come I see a blank sheet of paper :?:


Because the picture is over 1500 pixels wide, and the actual image is small and in the middle of that large expanse of white. You can only see a blank page, because that's all the forum will display; the right hand side of the huge picture, instead of adding scroll to the page so you can see it all. The solution of course, is for Staticbog to crop the image, so that only the relevant part of it is visible and upload that instead. Not this wallpaper sized white space.

yes im trying to fix it but every time i edit it well it just undoes the edit so i gave up
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Ninja » Mon Nov 23, 2015 2:04 am

His quotes are extremely basic
and his stats are very weak.
Not to mention that his story
is lame. ;)

His only original abilities are
Tornado and Wind Storm, and
those are so similar to each
other that I can't help but feel
like one of them should go. (Pref-
erably Tornado.) ;)

Rating: 2/10
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Staticbog » Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:00 pm

Ninja wrote:His quotes are extremely basic
and his stats are very weak.
Not to mention that his story
is lame. ;)

His only original abilities are
Tornado and Wind Storm, and
those are so similar to each
other that I can't help but feel
like one of them should go. (Pref-
erably Tornado.) ;)

Rating: 2/10

thats not his whole story here ill say it

He had a evil twin. he was never paid attention to. he evil twin was always getting so much attention with his powers of fire so he tried to foil his plans but turned out it was a clone and his brother was killed before he was born and it was a evil known as Vez'nan taking him to the demonic realm eventually rampaging going mentally insane eventually getting out with his mind corrupted fixed by denas who has died to his hands because it actually was not fixed and then he was considered evil for half his life and he is making up for it. not the end! and also i gave him a major health increase
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Big Bad Bug » Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:19 pm

Staticbog wrote:
Ninja wrote:His quotes are extremely basic
and his stats are very weak.
Not to mention that his story
is lame. ;)

His only original abilities are
Tornado and Wind Storm, and
those are so similar to each
other that I can't help but feel
like one of them should go. (Pref-
erably Tornado.) ;)

Rating: 2/10

thats not his whole story here ill say it

He had a evil twin. he was never paid attention to. he evil twin was always getting so much attention with his powers of fire so he tried to foil his plans but turned out it was a clone and his brother was killed before he was born and it was a evil known as Vez'nan taking him to the demonic realm eventually rampaging going mentally insane eventually getting out with his mind corrupted fixed by denas who has died to his hands because it actually was not fixed and then he was considered evil for half his life and he is making up for it. not the end! and also i gave him a major health increase


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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Anorak » Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:22 pm

Staticbog wrote:
Ninja wrote:His quotes are extremely basic
and his stats are very weak.
Not to mention that his story
is lame. ;)

His only original abilities are
Tornado and Wind Storm, and
those are so similar to each
other that I can't help but feel
like one of them should go. (Pref-
erably Tornado.) ;)

Rating: 2/10

thats not his whole story here ill say it

He had a evil twin. he was never paid attention to. he evil twin was always getting so much attention with his powers of fire so he tried to foil his plans but turned out it was a clone and his brother was killed before he was born and it was a evil known as Vez'nan taking him to the demonic realm eventually rampaging going mentally insane eventually getting out with his mind corrupted fixed by denas who has died to his hands because it actually was not fixed and then he was considered evil for half his life and he is making up for it. not the end! and also i gave him a major health increase


...Interesting.
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by WizardLord160 » Mon Nov 23, 2015 6:32 pm

You need better phrases

Will Wind Choke will only work on creatures that need oxegon? Imagine a zombie or golem dying from lack of oxegon. If it is a plant enemy does it take away their carbon dioxide instead?

It's stats are low. Flight only gains protection from melee attackers. Have you thought of Archers shooting arrows upward?

The Storm ability to push back enemies to the start should only push them back a little and only works on some enemies. Bosses, mini-bosses should not be affected. Huge enemies should only be stunned.

Name probably needs a little more creativity.
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Staticbog » Tue Nov 24, 2015 1:40 am

WizardLord160 wrote:You need better phrases

Will Wind Choke will only work on creatures that need oxegon? Imagine a zombie or golem dying from lack of oxegon. If it is a plant enemy does it take away their carbon dioxide instead?

It's stats are low. Flight only gains protection from melee attackers. Have you thought of Archers shooting arrows upward?

The Storm ability to push back enemies to the start should only push them back a little and only works on some enemies. Bosses, mini-bosses should not be affected. Huge enemies should only be stunned.

Name probably needs a little more creativity.


i think he used it on you...
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by Ninja » Tue Nov 24, 2015 5:08 pm

Staticbog wrote:
WizardLord160 wrote:You need better phrases

Will Wind Choke will only work on creatures that need oxegon? Imagine a zombie or golem dying from lack of oxegon. If it is a plant enemy does it take away their carbon dioxide instead?

It's stats are low. Flight only gains protection from melee attackers. Have you thought of Archers shooting arrows upward?

The Storm ability to push back enemies to the start should only push them back a little and only works on some enemies. Bosses, mini-bosses should not be affected. Huge enemies should only be stunned.

Name probably needs a little more creativity.


i think he used it on you...


Who used what on him? :?
Also, his backstory is...
strange, to say the least.
His stats are good now,
but he still needs a lot of
work. ;)
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Re: Hero Suggestion l Storm The Air Born (KR 4 suggestion)

by WizardLord160 » Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:24 pm

Staticbog wrote:
WizardLord160 wrote:You need better phrases

Will Wind Choke will only work on creatures that need oxegon? Imagine a zombie or golem dying from lack of oxegon. If it is a plant enemy does it take away their carbon dioxide instead?

It's stats are low. Flight only gains protection from melee attackers. Have you thought of Archers shooting arrows upward?

The Storm ability to push back enemies to the start should only push them back a little and only works on some enemies. Bosses, mini-bosses should not be affected. Huge enemies should only be stunned.

Name probably needs a little more creativity.


i think he used it on you...


I said that to you, Static. True, this needs a lot of work.
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