Big Bad Bug wrote:"Only the pure of heart can master wield it" There are 2 ways to rewrite that sentence and deliver the same idea, so I'll leave it to you to fix it as you like or leave it because it isn't a distracting mistake.
Corrected.
I really like her first skill. 414 damage to lose the horse seems a little extreme, but I would forgive it if she didn't have such high armor. Harvelle is such a tank, especially for being so fast! This skill is OP, but I like the way it makes it valuable to keep her at high health in order to make her stronger.
I've lowered the percentages slightly, to 30/40/50 just to balance it out a little more.
Is Master Sword just an AOE skill? It seems a bit vague. I don't have anything to comment on this since it's such a simple ability.
Yes, it's like Saitam's spinning attack.
Golden Apple is also hard to talk about, since it's exactly the same skill as Sybarite. In terms of balance, she's now even more tanky and hard to remove from her horse, but it's an aesthetically befitting ability and could be really awesome with some tweaks to its functionality, preferably in a way that gives it more of a playstyle.
It's meant to Sybarite because I really couldn't think of another skill to give her. I've added a distinction that it wont get used until she drops below 50% HP, which in turn with the mods I made to the steed skill, means she wont use it until after she has lost the horse.
The Fallen is a really good skill. Can revived units be killed again within 7 seconds? I assume so because the revival gives them a defence boost. I can imagine players using her awesome speed to dart around the map, reviving dying soldiers as they fall. It is fittingly heroic for a Valkyrie.
Yes they can be killed, but they wont revive again within that time.
Her Hero Spell is even more awesome than Maelstorm. Don't change a thing about it.
Okay
One final critique is that her Hero Points add up to 39 total, though all Origins-style heroes go up to 36.
AerisDraco wrote:Guido: 33
Maxwell: Unknown
Syrena: 27
Harvelle: 39
I've rebalanced the hero points (and added Maxwell's). Free heroes add up to 36, premium to 39.