Typos/grammar errors galore in Alvaro's background

[Xinix]

Hi,

First off, fantastic game (talking mainly about Kingdom Rush).
Second, I am by no means a native English speaker so take this any way you want!

On the new 'about us' page, everything reads pretty nice except Vanzen's background story. Below I corrected various things that I believe are mistakes.

Rumor says 'has it' that when a tsunami blasts 'does a tsunami blast?, crashes/hits perhaps?' on the coast of some exotic distant 'distant exotic' land, it was merely him thinking 'pondering' what kind of socks to wear.

Master of the Dark arts, no rival has ever come to eyesight him 'been able to lay their eyes on him' before perishing in the 'think you can leave 'the' since 'ways' is used' most unpleasant ways.

When everything goes straight to hell, his calm and serenity remains steady 'remain as steady' as a senior surgeon's.


That is all Hope I didn't offend anyone.
Oh and +1 on the Schwartz !

[FlashMush]

You have a point on some of them I see but others I think are fine as is. The ones that I think are ok as is would be the blasts (tsunamis can blast I suppose =p ), exotic distant I think can go either way, thinking is just a choice of diction and remains steady seems fine as is. Just my two cents though of course.

[Vanzen]

They should be fixed now. Thank you for letting us know