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by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:40 pm

Magicmetal grabbed a knife, and he keeped on stabbing himself until death arrived.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by AerisDraco » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:42 pm

magicmetal03 wrote:Magicmetal grabbed a knife, and he keeped on stabbing himself until death arrived.


Kept, not keeped.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:48 pm

And on top of that, it should have been "and then he kept on stabbing ... " to signify that he performed the action with the knife.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:51 pm

.....

Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:56 pm

magicmetal03 wrote:.....

Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.


That "hold" should be "held" and that "in" should be "him." :twisted:
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:58 pm

Ninja wrote:
magicmetal03 wrote:.....

Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.


That "hold" should be "held" and that "in" should be "him." :twisted:


Magicmetal stabbed himself in the stomach 3 times, hoping it will kill him.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:06 pm

magicmetal03 wrote:
Ninja wrote:
magicmetal03 wrote:.....

Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.


That "hold" should be "held" and that "in" should be "him." :twisted:


Magicmetal stabbed himself in the stomach 3 times, hoping it will kill him.


That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:24 pm

...........HELP!

Magicmetal magically kills himself.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Manijure » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:24 pm

Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."


As a fellow grammatically picky guy, I like and dislike this at the same time.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:29 pm

Manijure wrote:
Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."


As a fellow grammatically picky guy, I like and dislike this at the same time.


I'm just messing with Magic. If he wants to stop all this, then that's fine. ;)

@Magic: There are way too many ellipses before "HELP!"
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Juice Box » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:29 pm

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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:30 pm

Juice Box wrote:Image


:lol:
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:34 pm

Ninja wrote:
Manijure wrote:
Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."


As a fellow grammatically picky guy, I like and dislike this at the same time.


I'm just messing with Magic. If he wants to stop all this, then that's fine. ;)

@Magic: There are way too many ellipses before "HELP!"

I wanted to be messed with... Somehow.

This sentences has 3 error. Can you find them?
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Manijure » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:36 pm

Before Ninja beats me to it...

I want to be messed with... Somehow.

This sentence has 3 errors. Can you find them?

:P
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 9:41 pm

Manijure wrote:Before Ninja beats me to it...

I want to be messed with... Somehow.

This sentence has 3 errors. Can you find them?

:P


Correct Answer: This sentence has 2 errors.

1. Sentences- Sentence
2. Error-Error
3. 3-2

I guess counting the other sentence counts.... I think.

Anyways, now, there's too much people correcting my grammer. Even if I suicide, they're still going to correct my good grammer.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 10:34 pm

magicmetal03 wrote:Anyways, now, there's too much people correcting my grammer. Even if I suicide, they're still going to correct my good grammer.


"Grammer" should be "grammar."
"Much" should be "many."
"Even if I suicide" should be "Even if I commit suicide."
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by magicmetal03 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:11 pm

Ninja wrote:
magicmetal03 wrote:Anyways, now, there's too much people correcting my grammer. Even if I suicide, they're still going to correct my good grammer.


"Grammer" should be "grammar."
"Much" should be "many."
"Even if I suicide" should be "Even if I commit suicide."


I really need to learn grammer from you guys.
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by FeedDaKingdom » Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:35 pm

Not just grammar, you need to learn pronunciation (wtf since when this word has 'nun' in it???)
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Ninja » Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:52 pm

FeedDaKingdom wrote:Not just grammar, you need to learn pronunciation (wtf since when this word has 'nun' in it???)


How could you know if he needs to learn pronunciation? Also, "pronunciation" has always had "nun" in it. :?
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Re: Magicmetal's attempt to suicide

by Manijure » Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:54 pm

On an unrelated note (if it hasn't been unrelated already), I have this sudden urge to challenge Ninja on pronunciation and grammar. If you think you're the best in grammar, then, well, you haven't seen me at my best. ;)
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