magicmetal03 wrote:Magicmetal grabbed a knife, and he keeped on stabbing himself until death arrived.
magicmetal03 wrote:.....
Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.
Ninja wrote:magicmetal03 wrote:.....
Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.
That "hold" should be "held" and that "in" should be "him."
magicmetal03 wrote:Ninja wrote:magicmetal03 wrote:.....
Magicmetal's rage can't be hold in any longer. He went out to kill Ninja first, hoping it would calm in down and remove his thoughts about suicide.
That "hold" should be "held" and that "in" should be "him."
Magicmetal stabbed himself in the stomach 3 times, hoping it will kill him.
Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."
Manijure wrote:Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."
As a fellow grammatically picky guy, I like and dislike this at the same time.
Juice Box wrote:
Ninja wrote:Manijure wrote:Ninja wrote:That should be "stabs," because you used present tense with "will."
As a fellow grammatically picky guy, I like and dislike this at the same time.
I'm just messing with Magic. If he wants to stop all this, then that's fine.
@Magic: There are way too many ellipses before "HELP!"
Manijure wrote:Before Ninja beats me to it...
I want to be messed with... Somehow.
This sentence has 3 errors. Can you find them?
magicmetal03 wrote:Anyways, now, there's too much people correcting my grammer. Even if I suicide, they're still going to correct my good grammer.
Ninja wrote:magicmetal03 wrote:Anyways, now, there's too much people correcting my grammer. Even if I suicide, they're still going to correct my good grammer.
"Grammer" should be "grammar."
"Much" should be "many."
"Even if I suicide" should be "Even if I commit suicide."
FeedDaKingdom wrote:Not just grammar, you need to learn pronunciation (wtf since when this word has 'nun' in it???)